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Kitsune Miko 05-10-2004 04:08 PM

[IBC] haiku
 
Actually, if you want to get REAL technical...the poem
I sent as a reply is not a true haiku either. Having
a reference back to self or a personal situation is
called Senryu. Haiku is a moment with reference to
season, an observation from some distance,
emotionally.

Summer gone
By the whims of weather
So are the leaves

Kitsune Miko

Sorry, my Basho is at home.



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