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Old 24-03-2008, 04:30 PM posted to rec.gardens
JoeSpareBedroom JoeSpareBedroom is offline
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Default I would like some feedback..

"Christian" wrote in message
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Hi. I own a business "Professional Pond Maintenance and Fish Care".
I'm not here to promote my business. I only serve the Southern Oregon
area. I'm wanting to get any and all feedback, positive or negative,
on a website I designed recently to go with it. I advertise locally
and direct folks to my site for more information.

Here is the link:
http://allyoudoisfeedthefish.net/index.html

What do you think of the basic design?
Can you read it easily?
Ads or no ads?

I'm thinking people here are close to my target audience, being that
garden lovers usually like ponds even if they don't personally have
one.

Thank You,
Christian



On the "About Me" page: You meant to write the plural of "lily", which is
not "Lily's". It would be "l i l i es" (extra spaces added for readability).
As a customer, I'm usually put off by grammatical errors.

http://www.merriam-webster.com/dictionary/Lily