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Old 05-10-2004, 10:15 PM
Jim Lewis
 
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On 5 Oct 2004 at 7:49, Kitsune Miko wrote:

Yes, but....it doesn't alwyas work by that definition
in English. Yours works for the moment, describes a
moment, is seasonal, but lacks that punch or twist
characteristic of haiku.

summer's warmth
quickly forgotton
frost on my soul

Kitsune Miko



Haiku is the O. Henry (or Saki) of poetry. ;-)

Jim Lewis - - Tallahassee, FL - Bonsaiests
are like genealogists: We know our roots!

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